Storyboard - Part 1 (introduction and first minute)

I have included my introduction and first minute of shots that we plan to shoot for our music video. I tried to include a variety of shots that were inspired from existing ones that have been used before in a generic performance music video. I have included notes that will say the duration on how long the shots last, the lyrics being sung in that shot and the overall time scale since the start of the song.
My storyboard goes down the first column then down the second not across!

Story Boarding - Preliminary Video:

Here is the Story Board for Busted's 'That's what i go to school for' video, including every shot during the first 1 minute and 14 seconds and details on the actors in the shot and the lighting within the shot: