Boys. Further to our chat today here is some feedback.
1. Tackle the lighting issues 2. Quicker montage editing needed between 0-10 seconds 3. Take more interesting shots of Jake's drumming, he's extremely convincing so use this to your advantage 4. Keep Guy in the band at all costs. He's a great guitarist and will make life so much easier when filming shots. 5. Give it more when drumming at 101 Jake 6. Put a bobble hat on Jake.
Not much more I can add due to its brevity but the editing works and the framing is largely fine. Get sorted for the reshoot and good luck. As I've said this could potentially be a level 4 if you sort out the issues.
I like. Didn't think you were going to pull it together but well done so far. To add to Mr Smith's comments - agrre to focus on drummer would emulate many performance videos and would make the audience'feel' the beat as well as see it (Goodwin links between sound, lrics, perfomance) Obviously, more footage needed but keep it up and don't lose the motivation now.
Boys. Further to our chat today here is some feedback.
ReplyDelete1. Tackle the lighting issues
2. Quicker montage editing needed between 0-10 seconds
3. Take more interesting shots of Jake's drumming, he's extremely convincing so use this to your advantage
4. Keep Guy in the band at all costs. He's a great guitarist and will make life so much easier when filming shots.
5. Give it more when drumming at 101 Jake
6. Put a bobble hat on Jake.
Not much more I can add due to its brevity but the editing works and the framing is largely fine. Get sorted for the reshoot and good luck. As I've said this could potentially be a level 4 if you sort out the issues.
I like. Didn't think you were going to pull it together but well done so far.
ReplyDeleteTo add to Mr Smith's comments - agrre to focus on drummer would emulate many performance videos and would make the audience'feel' the beat as well as see it (Goodwin links between sound, lrics, perfomance)
Obviously, more footage needed but keep it up and don't lose the motivation now.